04-09-2013, 12:58 AM
These are cute!
Some colours could use stronger contrast (ash's backback green and several others, upon zooming in I noticed there are quite a few spots where you use colours so similar they're invisible on 1x resolution - you should merge them into single colours -- the red-striped guy's brighter stripes for example or Officer Jenny's hat and more). So basically, more contrast on some shades and less redundant or obsolete colours. Other than that I think you've got some solid work here. Some example animations of Ash's movement would be nice, though, so we could see if those animates well.
The Ash VS Sprite has a really straight arm, the upper arm looks too long - you should look up some references of the pose (you could even stand in front of a mirror to see get an idea of how it should look).
Some colours could use stronger contrast (ash's backback green and several others, upon zooming in I noticed there are quite a few spots where you use colours so similar they're invisible on 1x resolution - you should merge them into single colours -- the red-striped guy's brighter stripes for example or Officer Jenny's hat and more). So basically, more contrast on some shades and less redundant or obsolete colours. Other than that I think you've got some solid work here. Some example animations of Ash's movement would be nice, though, so we could see if those animates well.
The Ash VS Sprite has a really straight arm, the upper arm looks too long - you should look up some references of the pose (you could even stand in front of a mirror to see get an idea of how it should look).