04-09-2013, 07:36 AM
it looks stretched horizontally and his arm is a straight line, I don't think it should look like that. The cloth folds aren't convincing too, but they are hard to pull off. I suggest looking for similar poses you can refer on.
You also seem to use a lot of straight lines even for curved parts, which give him a ponty look (his back, for example. It goes diagonally down and then goes into 2 down 1 left pattern, which makes an angle. That looks really weird.
You also seem to use a lot of straight lines even for curved parts, which give him a ponty look (his back, for example. It goes diagonally down and then goes into 2 down 1 left pattern, which makes an angle. That looks really weird.
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