Mediocre Marisa Meddlings

[Hoeloe]

I did take a few pointers from that idea already, and drew it up in stages from that (starting with a stick figure, then building a naked figure on top, then building clothes on top of that, etc. while refining at each stage), see my previous post for one of the stages. However, I can see from both of your crits that I perhaps didn't put enough thought in at each stage, and this has propagated through into the final piece, so it may be worth me starting again with a little more thought into the pose etc.