04-11-2013, 04:42 PM
along with the pose problems there's this anatomy problem : for women, the width of the hips is most of the time equal to or bigger than the shoulder width
for the pose, you need to think about it
now for instance i get the feeling that you wanted to make her seem shy
in that case her arms should always be very close to her body (in yours the elbows aren't near the body)
legs would either be completely straight or the stereotypical position you can see below
finally she's leaning forwards too much atm (did you try flipping your sprite horizontally to see these kinds of mistakes ? it works great)
for the pose, you need to think about it
now for instance i get the feeling that you wanted to make her seem shy
in that case her arms should always be very close to her body (in yours the elbows aren't near the body)
legs would either be completely straight or the stereotypical position you can see below
finally she's leaning forwards too much atm (did you try flipping your sprite horizontally to see these kinds of mistakes ? it works great)