04-15-2013, 07:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-15-2013, 07:36 AM by AutumnSpire.)
I think your sprite could benefit from some more sel-out.
The browns could use more contrast and probably more saturation.
The face feels kinda scrunched up, probably because the eyes are so tiny and close together (since the sprite is 'chibi', maybe you should take advantage of the extra space on the face?)
Also, the fact that the upper part of the overalls' pocket is darker than the bottom seems contradictory to the lightsource, in my eyes.
I don't really like the hair shape and that bangs' symmetry, but I don't have a lot to suggest on that. That said, it doesn't seem like the bangs are casting any shadow at all.
The browns could use more contrast and probably more saturation.
The face feels kinda scrunched up, probably because the eyes are so tiny and close together (since the sprite is 'chibi', maybe you should take advantage of the extra space on the face?)
Also, the fact that the upper part of the overalls' pocket is darker than the bottom seems contradictory to the lightsource, in my eyes.
I don't really like the hair shape and that bangs' symmetry, but I don't have a lot to suggest on that. That said, it doesn't seem like the bangs are casting any shadow at all.