04-16-2013, 12:37 PM
I think you should darken the tail a little bit more, still looks like its attached to his head to me. Maybe make the base of the tail, near his head, darker and gradient to the colour you have now, if the tail is curved, or make the whole tail gradient a little darker if its curving away. (I might be wrong, i'm still not a great spriter :p)
Removing the teeth makes the sprite look nicer, instead of having flashes of white in the mouth area every few frames.
On fence, try and remember which direction the wood grain is, and that wood isnt just streaks, but will also have the patterns caused by a branch or other offshoot. If you add 1 or 2 of those in there instead of your 'Lonely pixels' then you should have a realistic wood textures, and it wont look so curved and slightly empty on the surface. But don't put back the lonelies.
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Removing the teeth makes the sprite look nicer, instead of having flashes of white in the mouth area every few frames.
On fence, try and remember which direction the wood grain is, and that wood isnt just streaks, but will also have the patterns caused by a branch or other offshoot. If you add 1 or 2 of those in there instead of your 'Lonely pixels' then you should have a realistic wood textures, and it wont look so curved and slightly empty on the surface. But don't put back the lonelies.
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