12-15-2008, 01:56 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-15-2008, 01:58 AM by Omegakyogre.)
Alright: Couple of problems here.
A- It's a recolor. Next time just use a recoloring program.
B- The edits you did make to the sprites might as well be negligible.
i. There's only one shade.
ii. They're little tiny dots.
C- The few customs on your sheet were carelessly made.
i. Just because it's a blob doesn't mean you can scribble on it.
ii. Your so called "effects" can't even be called sprites.
iii. The mushrooms are terrible. Spend some time on lineart.
iiii. I don't know what that ellipse thing is supposed to be, but it has no conceivable style to it.
D- On the note of style, there's no consistent style, even throughout your "customs."
E- You did ONE sprite from each game. Recoloring is bad enough-- recoloring ONE sprite is just lazy.
F- The giant picture that isn't yours takes up a ton of space in the sheet. Get rid of it. Reduce the size of the text, as well, please.
Please, I beg you: Do not post another sheet like this.
A- It's a recolor. Next time just use a recoloring program.
B- The edits you did make to the sprites might as well be negligible.
i. There's only one shade.
ii. They're little tiny dots.
C- The few customs on your sheet were carelessly made.
i. Just because it's a blob doesn't mean you can scribble on it.
ii. Your so called "effects" can't even be called sprites.
iii. The mushrooms are terrible. Spend some time on lineart.
iiii. I don't know what that ellipse thing is supposed to be, but it has no conceivable style to it.
D- On the note of style, there's no consistent style, even throughout your "customs."
E- You did ONE sprite from each game. Recoloring is bad enough-- recoloring ONE sprite is just lazy.
F- The giant picture that isn't yours takes up a ton of space in the sheet. Get rid of it. Reduce the size of the text, as well, please.
Please, I beg you: Do not post another sheet like this.