05-06-2013, 08:35 AM
They look alright, but his arms are in a weird position. Looks like his right arm is sticking out more than his left, which makes the stance unbalanced. the crotch/legs don't match with his upper body too.
some banding is present, and the gray pixel on his sideburn is weird and distracting as stray pixel. Be careful not leaving single pixel in middle of clusters, those attract attention way too much and makes your work noisy.
I saw the eye bandage as a monocle, maybe you need a more 'bandage-y' design. You know, square gauzes, covering his face more. Some bandages on his belly wound would be nice too, and would help with readability of the rest of the bandages.
some banding is present, and the gray pixel on his sideburn is weird and distracting as stray pixel. Be careful not leaving single pixel in middle of clusters, those attract attention way too much and makes your work noisy.
I saw the eye bandage as a monocle, maybe you need a more 'bandage-y' design. You know, square gauzes, covering his face more. Some bandages on his belly wound would be nice too, and would help with readability of the rest of the bandages.
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