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A chunky blacksmith, Brimley Moustache
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(05-06-2013, 08:35 AM)Gorsalami Wrote: They look alright, but his arms are in a weird position. Looks like his right arm is sticking out more than his left, which makes the stance unbalanced. the crotch/legs don't match with his upper body too.

I saw the eye bandage as a monocle, maybe you need a more 'bandage-y' design. You know, square gauzes, covering his face more. Some bandages on his belly wound would be nice too, and would help with readability of the rest of the bandages.

I must have missed that pixel. I'll fix that. Though, I'm not sure how to make the bandages look more like bandages at that small...
As for the stance, should I move his arms farther out, bend them backwards at the shoulder? I was going for hands resting on belt/apron.
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RE: A chunky blacksmith, Brimley Moustache - by Bearded_Beast - 05-06-2013, 02:21 PM

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