12-16-2008, 01:35 AM
The highlights on the upper-left side of his head should fit the contour of his head more. Right now it looks straight.
The sphere thing on the top of his head looks... kinda bent; I think it'd be better if you made it a perfect sphere rather than a jagged one. Now that I look at it again, the line art of the sphere is fine, but the shading make it look funny. If you pull back the shading 1 pixel to the southeast, that problem should be fixed.
There appears to be some sort of spike attached to the underside of the top of the curve on the back of his head, but it doesn't look properly outlined. It's probably too small to give it a dark outline, but it might look better if you darken the outer pixels of it.
That's all I can think of right now. Looks pretty good. Weird, but good.
The sphere thing on the top of his head looks... kinda bent; I think it'd be better if you made it a perfect sphere rather than a jagged one. Now that I look at it again, the line art of the sphere is fine, but the shading make it look funny. If you pull back the shading 1 pixel to the southeast, that problem should be fixed.
There appears to be some sort of spike attached to the underside of the top of the curve on the back of his head, but it doesn't look properly outlined. It's probably too small to give it a dark outline, but it might look better if you darken the outer pixels of it.
That's all I can think of right now. Looks pretty good. Weird, but good.