05-21-2013, 10:58 PM
(05-21-2013, 09:00 PM)Senku Niola Wrote: Attempt to redo Senku a bit bigger, slightly still rough just for an idea of how it should come out, the short sleeve shirt showing the sleeves is just reference for myself.
Alright, A little better. Anatomy is going to do wonders for this, especially during the line work phase.
Your legs are way too straight and stubby. In fact, the majority of the body is too straight. No one stands perfectly erect. The arms are also a little confusing and the feet distract from the overall image. The only reason sonic has huge feet is because he runs incredibly fast, he is known for how fast his feet are.
Here's an example. You'll want to add more curves to your lines, and make a more anatomically correct head. Not a fan of perfect circles.
Keep working at it, you'll get there!