12-17-2008, 01:06 AM
(12-16-2008, 10:33 PM)Coffee Alloys Wrote: Ok Ill edit the dithering.But since this is doing pretty well...
(Generic Pokemon Evolution Theme plays)
Crits (or name) on this one anybody?
/agree with DeathSamus; the colors are too dark. A reduction in contrast will help you to reduce dithering without making it look terrible, as well.
This one suffers from some pose/line art problems:
First of all, it looks like it's in a resting state, but doesn't look balanced; it looks like it's about to fall over. Extend its left (our right) leg and plant it on the ground. Also, move his right foot down-and-left (our POV) so his leg attaches to it more realistically. Its head also looks 'wobber-jogged increase the size of its jaw and smooth the outline out. The spikes on the back of his head would look better if you found a way to make them look more stiff, as well. Right now they look flexible; especially the middle one. The shading on its chest looks jagged, as well.
Still, I'm liking it so far.