Ashura's Alchemy Lab

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i think you could use more contrasting colors for metal characters (but that would go against MMX style)... That green fin thing on his head is really pale, it could use a little more contrast.

the golden guy looks in style, i think, but idk what I'm looking at. An eagle-headed humanoid robot? Or is that a randomly spiked helmet? There's too much banding and outlines that makes readability difficult.

Yes, I see what you mean, the design is inspired by Dragon Slayer Ornstein from Dark Souls a very overly detailed character, and I tried cramming all that detail into the small area.