06-20-2013, 10:03 PM
Here are a few quick things I noticed:
There's a lot of pillow shading going on and each value for the colors are too similar to each other. I'd definitely increase the contrast of those shades and maybe liven up the color scheme a bit. I noticed that some of the linework is a little bit jaggy, too.
There's a lot of pillow shading going on and each value for the colors are too similar to each other. I'd definitely increase the contrast of those shades and maybe liven up the color scheme a bit. I noticed that some of the linework is a little bit jaggy, too.