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Hmm, I think I see what you're saying. I feel like the upturned folds of the jacket might have something to do with it. As I was making the sprite, it seemed that this seemed more like an antagonist than a protagonist, but I'm still a bit iffy about that.

As for the hair, I see why the top hair design looks a bit off. I was going for a design as unique as Phoenix Wright's, and I'd like that to be the final design; however, I could settle for completely changing the hair. As for the beard, could you elaborate more on why the beard looks off? If there's a problem, I'd really like to know exactly what you mean by a "smashed style".

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It's still a work in progress, but this is the basic design for a witness in the first case: Roll from the Mega Man series.

There's something that I find kind of off about this sprite, but I think a comparison to some actual art is the reason. I feel like the basic structure of the face is what's wrong, but I'm not sure what's off about it. Really open to some advice here.
Quote:Everyone's crazy. Most people are just crazy in the same way and call it normal.
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I'm DeathByJaguar, but you can call me Ricky, I guess. I dunno. I draw, program a little, and am writing a novel that has no title at the moment.
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DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-01-2013, 02:39 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by SmithyGCN - 07-01-2013, 08:21 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-01-2013, 11:53 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by Virt - 07-02-2013, 09:33 AM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-02-2013, 01:34 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by Virt - 07-02-2013, 02:23 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-02-2013, 02:42 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-08-2013, 05:03 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by Virt - 07-08-2013, 07:31 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-10-2013, 12:02 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-10-2013, 08:36 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by x0_000 - 07-10-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by MotorRoach - 07-10-2013, 11:53 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-14-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by Zapchu25 - 07-15-2013, 04:11 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-16-2013, 12:42 AM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 07-27-2013, 09:38 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by deathbyjaguar - 08-11-2013, 10:54 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by BrettG - 08-12-2013, 01:21 PM
RE: DeathByJaguar's Pixelart - by Candel - 08-14-2013, 02:24 AM

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