07-12-2013, 07:44 AM
In the first color background on this, the face-shround seemed more vivid to me, but with the brighter background of the latest version, the held mask is must more distinct to me.
From a design standpoint, the features seem to strongly resemble the Organization 13 cloaks ala Kingdom Hearts, but the actual worn clothes seem more hood and coat rather than hoodie-robe, so i'm not sure if the resemblance is intended. It's not a bad thing i'm critiquing or whatnot, just pointing out this seemed familiar.
The head/hood seems a little too far to the audience's right and I think the boots could either use a bit more on the edges to convery a bit more thickness, o r maybe get another color up top to help indicate the slope; I think the layout of the boot-toe area is good, but tome, it seems a little more flat/thin than I think it should.
The extra little details on the hood are esp neato. So quick sum up, looks good, biggest thing imo is the head/hood seems a bit out of position
From a design standpoint, the features seem to strongly resemble the Organization 13 cloaks ala Kingdom Hearts, but the actual worn clothes seem more hood and coat rather than hoodie-robe, so i'm not sure if the resemblance is intended. It's not a bad thing i'm critiquing or whatnot, just pointing out this seemed familiar.
The head/hood seems a little too far to the audience's right and I think the boots could either use a bit more on the edges to convery a bit more thickness, o r maybe get another color up top to help indicate the slope; I think the layout of the boot-toe area is good, but tome, it seems a little more flat/thin than I think it should.
The extra little details on the hood are esp neato. So quick sum up, looks good, biggest thing imo is the head/hood seems a bit out of position