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FP's Sprite thread.
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The new features you added in the mugshots doesn't fit. The hair is pillowed and his clothes lack shading/contrast/Anti-Alias. Those things that... are supposed... to look like tears doesn't blend very well with the sprite. Some shading parts look jagged and lazily done (You just took the hair outline from the first mug and pated on top of the last ones). His bandana sticks out way too much (no Anti-Alias, MS Paint colors), try making it less blatant.

Onto the sprite... His pants are pillowy and... that's a pretty massive air hump (But that's the style's fault :/) You could shade the outline a bit, too.
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FP's Sprite thread. - by Fuzion Phoeinx - 12-19-2008, 09:40 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by GrooveMan.exe - 12-19-2008, 10:11 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Fuzion Phoeinx - 12-19-2008, 10:26 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Chdonga - 12-19-2008, 10:34 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Fuzion Phoeinx - 12-19-2008, 10:36 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Omegakyogre - 12-19-2008, 11:23 AM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Fuzion Phoeinx - 12-19-2008, 01:38 PM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Chdonga - 12-19-2008, 03:12 PM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Koopaul - 12-19-2008, 08:01 PM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Gors - 12-19-2008, 07:46 PM
RE: FP's Sprite thread. - by Fuzion Phoeinx - 12-22-2008, 10:08 AM

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