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and monstarules, stop being dense when people are actually trying to help you out. This is not a place to show your sprites and say "there's more coming, wait for it". This is not a place to gather interest, it's mainly a place to show sprites and get tips on how to make it better. The interest comes naturally as you go fix your stuff.

The most important thing on making a camouflaged suit is to make it blend with the environment. Therefore, you should have referenced how the Metal Slug games draw trees and bushes. You can't just wing the texturing out, that will just make it look like a pile of barf

your tanks and mechs are subpar too, in the sense that it really looks flat compared to everything. Especially this

[Image: rib_boat2.png]

which is pillowshaded and has too mush straight lines in it. Of course, those are artificial mechs and sure there will be straight lines and robotic looks, but use this sprite you posted as reference:

[Image: transport.gif]

It doesn't have abuse of black outlines as yours, and there's shading and texturing to make it look nice and tridimensional. You'll need to master antialiasing to make 'thinner than 1px' lines, and those fine details.

I also am not familiar with mechs (especially those with Metal Slug style) but by doing something in its style (or similar to it), you will need to step it up and increase detail and accompany it with really smooth animations.
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Monstarules sprite thread - by monstarules - 08-08-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Neweegee - 08-09-2013, 12:26 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Hiynastrike - 08-09-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by monstarules - 08-09-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Hiynastrike - 08-09-2013, 09:18 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by monstarules - 08-09-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Hiynastrike - 08-10-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Sinkin - 08-10-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Gors - 08-11-2013, 08:44 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by monstarules - 08-19-2013, 10:10 PM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Hiynastrike - 08-20-2013, 12:08 AM
RE: Monstarules sprite thread - by Ton - 08-20-2013, 10:46 AM

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