08-12-2013, 01:21 PM
the design and colour scheme works well and the hair flows a lot better in a more recognizable form.
however the outstretched hand does appear to almost be floating over the cufflinks, maybe a darker line bordering where they meet might fix that.
and eye does look a little strange, like its twisted to a 45 degree angle on the face and looks rather awkward.
given the angle of the head itself I would say skew the lines of the eye up or down to make the eye appear level to adjust that.
however the outstretched hand does appear to almost be floating over the cufflinks, maybe a darker line bordering where they meet might fix that.
and eye does look a little strange, like its twisted to a 45 degree angle on the face and looks rather awkward.
given the angle of the head itself I would say skew the lines of the eye up or down to make the eye appear level to adjust that.