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(09-05-2013, 07:16 PM)Baegal Wrote: the bob in the walking should be at the knees, not the neck!
It makes his hips look awkwardly rigid and the neck bump seems really unecessary.

Try moving the bob down to the knees or waist.
Haha, sure thing. I'll try to fix that.

(09-05-2013, 07:22 PM)SchAlternate Wrote: Also, it looks like he's wobbling his arms rather than bending them
I forgot how hilarious his arm movements were.
I'll try to fix that too.

(09-05-2013, 08:38 PM)Laphos Wrote: Add some shadows and a little more details to it.

The aim, originally, was to have quite a simplified design, but since this isn't being used for anything now, I might as well mess with it. Maybe some shadows and detailing to make it look nicer.

Thanks for the crit. guys
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Loose Pixels - by culture - 09-05-2013, 07:03 PM
RE: Loose Pixels - by Baegal - 09-05-2013, 07:16 PM
RE: Loose Pixels - by SchAlternate - 09-05-2013, 07:22 PM
RE: Loose Pixels - by Laphos - 09-05-2013, 08:38 PM
RE: Loose Pixels - by culture - 09-05-2013, 10:46 PM

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