09-29-2013, 12:12 PM
Lots of Jaggy edges there. Always a danger when using strong black for an outline. I know you might be thinking "I have to use black, like they do in the movie" - go look at some screenshots, they don't.
Your detail is generally good, but the line work needs fixing. The big totoro also looks a bit wrong angle and form wise. If any of this stuff is meant to be to scale it's a way off.
Baron's arm is also really small, even more so considering his body it tilting towards the screen.
Your detail is generally good, but the line work needs fixing. The big totoro also looks a bit wrong angle and form wise. If any of this stuff is meant to be to scale it's a way off.
Baron's arm is also really small, even more so considering his body it tilting towards the screen.