12-23-2008, 05:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-23-2008, 05:41 PM by SBB_GameMaster.)
i've reposted my art, and now it looks better...
ultraviolet,
i've got a responce below to your comments..
Are they all proportional to their respective size?
Yanmega and Rotom Wind form could be a bit bigger.
I made them bigger, they are only slightly larger, though.
Do they all have proper colors?
Yanmega's body needs more saturation, Spiritomb's "aura" needs to be a dull purple and Rotom Normal form needs to be more orange than yellow orange.
Yanmega is now more saturated, Spiritomb is now a dull purple, and Rotom changed to orange.
Are they accurate in design?
Rotom Cut Form needs a sharper smile, with teeth. Electrode's eyes should be rounder.
the smile is now sharper, has teeth, and has an outline. Electrode now has rounder eyes.
Do they have proper shading?
Regigigas' right shoulder doesn't.
it does now.
Do they have good contrast?
Probopass has hardly any contrast.
And now he had a good shine added to his body
Do they look 3-D?
Regice doesn't.
I removed the outline, and now it does look better.
Do any details look out of character?
Porygon-Z's arms aren't attached to it, and Pikachu has red circles for cheeks.
The arms are no longer attacked and Pikachu just got plastic face surgery (lol, joking)
Do they have enough detail?
Probopass doesn't.
Probopass should be much better now.
Are they overall good?
A-
That’s a very generous grade. Thank you.
ultraviolet,
i've got a responce below to your comments..
Are they all proportional to their respective size?
Yanmega and Rotom Wind form could be a bit bigger.
I made them bigger, they are only slightly larger, though.
Do they all have proper colors?
Yanmega's body needs more saturation, Spiritomb's "aura" needs to be a dull purple and Rotom Normal form needs to be more orange than yellow orange.
Yanmega is now more saturated, Spiritomb is now a dull purple, and Rotom changed to orange.
Are they accurate in design?
Rotom Cut Form needs a sharper smile, with teeth. Electrode's eyes should be rounder.
the smile is now sharper, has teeth, and has an outline. Electrode now has rounder eyes.
Do they have proper shading?
Regigigas' right shoulder doesn't.
it does now.
Do they have good contrast?
Probopass has hardly any contrast.
And now he had a good shine added to his body
Do they look 3-D?
Regice doesn't.
I removed the outline, and now it does look better.
Do any details look out of character?
Porygon-Z's arms aren't attached to it, and Pikachu has red circles for cheeks.
The arms are no longer attacked and Pikachu just got plastic face surgery (lol, joking)
Do they have enough detail?
Probopass doesn't.
Probopass should be much better now.
Are they overall good?
A-
That’s a very generous grade. Thank you.