Custom Mr. L

[Gors]

Here it goes...

The sprite isn't good, and I'll tell you why: his nose is too big and is placed way too much to the right. His hat isn't good too. It's brim is too short and blocky. You should make it more curved, like the one in the first version.

His limbs are too jagged and blocky and his body get thinner when he walks. The arms look like they won't cycle well (same with the legs) and the shading is very poor. His outline is colored, but it doesn't give the 3D look it should have. You should learn how to choose better colors and how to shade correctly (see tutorials in the internet).

So, I suggest redoing the sprite. It's hard, I know, but this will help you to improve!

oh, by the way, Merry Christmas, everyone!