01-22-2014, 04:58 PM
Very nice, especially the fairies. The Gallade however could use some improvement, I can see you're going for a dynamic pose here which is looking cool so far, but his legs look odd. His pose looks rather unbalanced as if after the attack he's going to fall, and while you made his backleg bend, the one coming forward has no indication of knees whatsoever, so it looks like he's squatting down really low, also it could be interpreted as him having a very big foot as the perspective isn't quite clear. Also I know his blade is going in motion but I think the lineart there could be smoother, looks rugged and jaggy compared to the rest of him. Also perhaps add some more shades for the green/turquoise/red? you have 3 shades for the white, so it kinda makes the rest of him look a bit less detailed. I wouldn't say another shade for all 3 colors are necessary, just something to think about, especially for the green. Other than that looking great, hope to see more.