03-02-2014, 01:25 PM
I'm not fond of her nose, it kind of looks like it's at the wrong angle. Shouldn't the lighting run along the bridge due to the elevation?
Got a couple of qualms about the arm on the right. I think the shading is a bit excessive around the elbow area, there's something off about it.
The right line of her forearm also seems to have a little too much AA, makes it seem a little banded. I think the upper line of her panties also looks a little jittery due to the sel-out. Certainly not as smooth as, say, her face.
Tbh though, I'm mostly grasping here and thought it unfortunate your topic wasn't getting attention. I really like your work!
Got a couple of qualms about the arm on the right. I think the shading is a bit excessive around the elbow area, there's something off about it.
The right line of her forearm also seems to have a little too much AA, makes it seem a little banded. I think the upper line of her panties also looks a little jittery due to the sel-out. Certainly not as smooth as, say, her face.
Tbh though, I'm mostly grasping here and thought it unfortunate your topic wasn't getting attention. I really like your work!