12-30-2008, 01:15 AM
Watt ain't half bad. Needs some work, for instance, it seems a little too circular and the sparky things seem too long. I would need a good refrence to back up my statement.
The ghosts, however, look to scribbly. Remove the outline, unless that's a style paper mario style you're trying to do...(and if it is a style, then add an outline to Watt...)
For bootler, there isn't even a single sprite of him "standing" still...I need to see a basic lineart to critique it.
The ghosts, however, look to scribbly. Remove the outline, unless that's a style paper mario style you're trying to do...(and if it is a style, then add an outline to Watt...)
For bootler, there isn't even a single sprite of him "standing" still...I need to see a basic lineart to critique it.