03-23-2014, 08:14 AM
These are really nice (especially the pipes, wow) but I noticed a few things:
~The top of Yoshi's nose on the first frame has banding.
~The upper jaw of Baby Yoshi's mouth on the first frame seems to have too much shading, but this could just be personal opinion.
~Can't really tell that the Fire Flower and Mushrooms have eyes unless you look in close (the Mushrooms suffer less from this than the Fire Flower, however), though I'm not sure how much you can do about that in the Fire Flower's case.
~The wing's second plume has a jaggy at the tip.
~The top-most outline on Mario and Luigi's hats are a bit blocky/flat-edged, and the same goes for Mario's (our) left arm/wrist. In fact it actually gives the impression of an elbow, thus making Mario's forearm appear really short.
Hopefully that helps!
~The top of Yoshi's nose on the first frame has banding.
~The upper jaw of Baby Yoshi's mouth on the first frame seems to have too much shading, but this could just be personal opinion.
~Can't really tell that the Fire Flower and Mushrooms have eyes unless you look in close (the Mushrooms suffer less from this than the Fire Flower, however), though I'm not sure how much you can do about that in the Fire Flower's case.
~The wing's second plume has a jaggy at the tip.
~The top-most outline on Mario and Luigi's hats are a bit blocky/flat-edged, and the same goes for Mario's (our) left arm/wrist. In fact it actually gives the impression of an elbow, thus making Mario's forearm appear really short.
Hopefully that helps!
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