03-30-2014, 06:43 AM
(03-29-2014, 08:34 PM)Joxon Wrote: Better now?
Yeah, the first three mushrooms are better (though I think you would be better off without that pinkish shade on the sides of the mushrooms), but the other stuff still needs work.
For instance, there's the fire flower. The second yellow shade is no good. I suggest you hue-shift it towards orange/red more, and lower its saturation. The stem shades, once more, do not have enough contrast (Well, this is mostly referring to the second shade). And honestly, the stem could be reworked to have a more defined shape. especially the leaves. The yellow mushroom's last shade could be darker still. Darker colors tend to be less saturated, so it wouldn't hurt to decrease saturation either. As for the golden mushroom (and the rest of the blocks, coins and stuff)...I'd say it has all the problems mentioned before, as well as a few others, like the colors picked not being the most suitable for it. Keep working on it.
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