Some Critique, Please.

[ClubbyBear]

Oh hey! Nice to see you around here!

EDIT: Update on shading.

Well, for starters, you use WAY too many shades, and they all are WAY too similar. I'd start by either making each shade stand out more or flat out remove some of them. Though most of the problems comes from the fact that even the lightest shades are ridiculously dark. You may want to lighten those up a bit anyway.


Here, I just lightened things up a bit. The shading itself is left intact.

(Also, try to avoid making your outline pure black, as paint often reads transparency as pure black. Try to use really dark blue/purple next time.)

Oh, hi Sch! Didn't expect to see you on here, although I kinda did...

The thing is, the style is meant to be VERY dark, because of the way it's going to be made, but the palette you made is really good. I think I can fit it in by tinkering with the lightest shades. I also will change the outline to a darkish gray, so it looks very similar, but not 100% black.