A new challenger approaches

[Level 1]

Appreciate the help guys, and here are some things I've come up with

I tried rounding up the patch of hair on the back, and I am working on new poses to add variety, at least until I am happy with a pose that I am happy with.

Also, in regards to my work being compared to 1Up's, it feels bitter sweet at times, I will admit, his work is amazing, and being compared to his style is kinda nice, but sometimes that distracts criticism.