The shading is too heavy to be in style, try to simplify. Here's an edit:
![[Image: 8CPMk6S.png]](http://i.imgur.com/8CPMk6S.png)
Even now, It might have too much shading, but you get the idea. I tried to tweak that white thing on the side of his head, since it looks really flat, but I haven't the slightest clue of what it is, so my interpretation might be off.
EDIT: Welp, sorry David : V
![[Image: 8CPMk6S.png]](http://i.imgur.com/8CPMk6S.png)
Even now, It might have too much shading, but you get the idea. I tried to tweak that white thing on the side of his head, since it looks really flat, but I haven't the slightest clue of what it is, so my interpretation might be off.
EDIT: Welp, sorry David : V