04-20-2014, 10:00 PM
I like your latest sprites!
I think the sclera for the character in white and the character in black is a little too broad.
For the feral knight there, I think the "skirt" falls unnaturally. It should probably cover more of the leg, and the outline should follow better what the folds suggest.
As for the sword, I suppose you intend to make it look worn or stylize it somehow, but it really does look a little too gritty, so I think you should try to make the shades and lighting cleaner. The chest also has some slight banding you ought to clear up a little.
I think the sclera for the character in white and the character in black is a little too broad.
For the feral knight there, I think the "skirt" falls unnaturally. It should probably cover more of the leg, and the outline should follow better what the folds suggest.
As for the sword, I suppose you intend to make it look worn or stylize it somehow, but it really does look a little too gritty, so I think you should try to make the shades and lighting cleaner. The chest also has some slight banding you ought to clear up a little.