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It is really cluttered. I agree with Dex, keep the focus on the characters. Also, I'd move the guy with the suit and the floating head right a litte, so he's slightly behind the big head, adding a little depth. Maybe make him slightly bigger too?

The head is p.cool though.
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See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-30-2008, 09:15 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Wes - 12-30-2008, 09:18 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Zerrodo - 12-30-2008, 09:25 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Phage - 12-30-2008, 09:45 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-30-2008, 09:43 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Adam - 12-30-2008, 09:44 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by lone wolf-rayet star - 12-30-2008, 09:59 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by JoshR691 - 12-31-2008, 06:25 AM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-31-2008, 12:38 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Adam - 12-31-2008, 01:17 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Heckle - 12-31-2008, 02:03 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-31-2008, 06:45 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Tero - 12-31-2008, 06:54 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-31-2008, 11:18 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by triptych - 12-31-2008, 11:31 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by Ninspriterx - 12-31-2008, 11:43 PM
RE: See a work in progress! - by triptych - 01-01-2009, 12:25 AM
RE: See a work in progress! - by JoshR691 - 01-01-2009, 04:30 PM

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