just something i'm working on..

[Paladin]

Please read all of my everything, thank you.

Hmm, you're coming off as kinda butthurt. I really don't want to lose my temper here,
but I'm getting a bit frustrated by your attitude. Still, I'll keep this post calm. I'm not really sure if you don't know
how to react to criticism or if you're trying to be aggressive. Clinging on to mistakes
just because they are made by you doesn't help, because you should learn from mistakes. And they can be hard to spot by yourself because you will always have a
rose tinted view to some degree of your own work. Therefore, the best way to learn
is to ask someone else for an unbiased opinion, and this is why you should listen to criticism.

From a few threads of mine back:



This is a sprite I made. I posted it here to get criticism.



After that it turned out like this.
This is the best example I can think of, because it clearly shows how much
criticism helped me. I can only hope you will start thinking the same way.

EDIT: Zye, it looks better, but the red is kinda hard to distinguish from the background. Perhaps you could try making the background blue or teal or something?