05-17-2014, 08:36 PM
(Dangit, first critique)
Put simply, I think there needs to be more shading.
![[Image: help1_by_quirbstheepic-d7irhpi.png]](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/137/d/2/help1_by_quirbstheepic-d7irhpi.png)
On the running sprite, (I'm just not gonna bother with the idle GIF) I put EPIC BLUE BOXES around where I put shading to show what I mean. I think keeping it unshaded would make it look flat (if that's what you were doing just ignore this), so I hope that this critique with EPIC BLUE BOXES will help.
Put simply, I think there needs to be more shading.
On the running sprite, (I'm just not gonna bother with the idle GIF) I put EPIC BLUE BOXES around where I put shading to show what I mean. I think keeping it unshaded would make it look flat (if that's what you were doing just ignore this), so I hope that this critique with EPIC BLUE BOXES will help.