05-23-2014, 12:44 PM
it does look better
though
the foot that stays rooted looks like it might be changing size, too
the foot that's moving looks like it's sliding along the ground rather than being lifted up
the upper body looks good
maybe make his right hand in the final frame a little bigger, since right now it seems to shrink for the last frame
maybe also extend the sword in the first windup frames to be a little longer so we can see it more clearly (and then you have a nice swooshy motion blur when he swings it that's also more visible)
the way he's holding the sword in the last frame might also be awkward, like he just smacked the enemy with the flat side of the sword; maybe change the angle a bit?
though
the foot that stays rooted looks like it might be changing size, too
the foot that's moving looks like it's sliding along the ground rather than being lifted up
the upper body looks good
maybe make his right hand in the final frame a little bigger, since right now it seems to shrink for the last frame
maybe also extend the sword in the first windup frames to be a little longer so we can see it more clearly (and then you have a nice swooshy motion blur when he swings it that's also more visible)
the way he's holding the sword in the last frame might also be awkward, like he just smacked the enemy with the flat side of the sword; maybe change the angle a bit?