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the FE guy's clothing. Especially the shoulder spikes, they seem lopsided and the left side of the body looks shorter than the other. The perspective isn't forking for me, and i think that making the chin go a little lower would make the pose more natural. (it looks like he is raising it a little.

as for the ear girl up there, it's weird that you spent time detailing the tail fur nad this detail didn't go to her hair, and the gun's barrel looks oval rather than spherical. the perspective of the gun suggests that the crosshair's supposed to be slanted however it's 100% vertical. it looks broken up
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cat litter - by Kitsu - 04-25-2014, 08:22 PM
RE: cat litter - by Kelvin - 04-26-2014, 05:38 AM
RE: cat litter - by Level 1 - 04-26-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: cat litter - by recme - 04-26-2014, 09:06 PM
RE: cat litter - by Kitsu - 04-30-2014, 02:53 PM
RE: cat litter - by Kelvin - 05-01-2014, 01:48 PM
RE: cat litter - by Kitsu - 05-08-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: cat litter - by maarten - 05-09-2014, 09:32 AM
RE: cat litter - by Kitsu - 05-27-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: cat litter - by Level 1 - 05-09-2014, 05:06 PM
RE: cat litter - by Gors - 05-09-2014, 06:44 PM
RE: cat litter - by Gors - 05-27-2014, 03:50 PM

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