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Bloom [?]
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It looks alright so far

here's some pointers:
1) too much AA; the style almost never uses AA. if you ever feel like you really need it to smooth out your lines, I'd actually suggest changing your lines first
2) the skirt looks awkwardly placed, probably because the petals on our right look like they're sinking; I think you should probably lift both right petals by a single pixel, then lift the rightmost petal by one more pixel (couldn't think of a good way to phrase that lol)
3) might want to also try experimenting with not outlining the tops of the petals, so they feel more connected to the rest of the shirt/dress/whatever the top part would be called
4) meanwhile, the pink gem on the chest could probably stand to be outlined or something; the petals on the gem especially are hard to see against the dark green
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Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 05-30-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-30-2014, 11:28 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Kitsu - 05-30-2014, 11:51 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-30-2014, 01:34 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Iocus - 05-30-2014, 06:59 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Ploaj - 05-31-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-31-2014, 03:24 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by E-Man - 05-31-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Yangfly Master - 05-31-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by E-Man - 05-31-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TomGuycott - 05-31-2014, 04:21 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 05-31-2014, 05:21 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Iocus - 05-31-2014, 07:23 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 06-13-2014, 12:34 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 06-13-2014, 06:20 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 06-13-2014, 12:51 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Baegal - 06-13-2014, 01:10 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-11-2015, 06:23 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TomGuycott - 08-11-2015, 06:38 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-11-2015, 07:01 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TheShyGuy - 08-11-2015, 07:52 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by Garamonde - 08-11-2015, 08:45 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by NICKtendo DS - 08-12-2015, 03:22 AM
RE: Bloom [?] - by recme - 08-11-2015, 09:14 PM
RE: Bloom [?] - by TheShyGuy - 08-18-2015, 04:30 AM

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