06-03-2014, 12:01 PM
in the second image, the girl on the right and guy underneath dont carry the no-outline style very well imo
either try and use aa to smoothen things out or use selout it doesn't look too good at the moment
for the ike, maybe try and find a way to show a little more eyebrow ? looks great though
in the NES remasters, the mario looks pretty bland and doesn't add much to the original in terms of posing and design
samus' pose doesn't make much sense either, specifically in the legs
that greaser kid has something really weird going on the his right/our left side of his face, like you tried to show the sideburns and a little of the ear but it doesn't work
a clear outline'll look much better
and the before-last image, his look direction makes no sense like a chameleon kinda
all in all this is good stuff though keep it up
either try and use aa to smoothen things out or use selout it doesn't look too good at the moment
for the ike, maybe try and find a way to show a little more eyebrow ? looks great though
in the NES remasters, the mario looks pretty bland and doesn't add much to the original in terms of posing and design
samus' pose doesn't make much sense either, specifically in the legs
that greaser kid has something really weird going on the his right/our left side of his face, like you tried to show the sideburns and a little of the ear but it doesn't work
a clear outline'll look much better
and the before-last image, his look direction makes no sense like a chameleon kinda
all in all this is good stuff though keep it up