06-10-2014, 05:20 PM
nice job on the head! though, a few more problems are still present
im looking at the sprite up close, so take notes of what im about to say
[*]move the neck/head to the right by one pixel
[*]give him some defined elbows
[*]his feet should be flat on the ground
[*]make his torso a bit fatter
[*]make the crotch area a bit more defined
you should also keep a defined light source, which is upright. the shoulders dont really listen to that rule, so id edit that if i were you!
im looking at the sprite up close, so take notes of what im about to say
[*]move the neck/head to the right by one pixel
[*]give him some defined elbows
[*]his feet should be flat on the ground
[*]make his torso a bit fatter
[*]make the crotch area a bit more defined
you should also keep a defined light source, which is upright. the shoulders dont really listen to that rule, so id edit that if i were you!