06-16-2014, 08:32 PM
WARNING: HIGHLY SUBJECTIVE INPUT AHEAD
![[Image: 4gNkXnY.png]](http://i.imgur.com/4gNkXnY.png)
So here's a few ideas for you. A lot of this is conceptual rather than technical, so use it as you feel.
First off, his upper torso is kind of static. I attempted to fix that by inclining his torso and head further. His face looks even really plain in the latest revision, so I took a little from the previous one along with some other tweaks to make it more interesting.
The transparent head is probably not water, but I took a gamble and assumed it was some sort of liquid. Since the head was really the most interesting part of your design, I recycled some of that concept for other body parts, giving him liquid limbs. The problem I thought the main body had was that it was dully uniform. I also tried to give him a more interesting head shape to go with the whole water motif.
Even if his head is not water, but it's actually crystal or something, you could give him a rope of magically floating orbs for limbs, or a trail of psychic energy, or something like that. Just, try to look for ways for the parts to be more distinct, instead of simply grey blobs.
So here's a few ideas for you. A lot of this is conceptual rather than technical, so use it as you feel.
First off, his upper torso is kind of static. I attempted to fix that by inclining his torso and head further. His face looks even really plain in the latest revision, so I took a little from the previous one along with some other tweaks to make it more interesting.
The transparent head is probably not water, but I took a gamble and assumed it was some sort of liquid. Since the head was really the most interesting part of your design, I recycled some of that concept for other body parts, giving him liquid limbs. The problem I thought the main body had was that it was dully uniform. I also tried to give him a more interesting head shape to go with the whole water motif.
Even if his head is not water, but it's actually crystal or something, you could give him a rope of magically floating orbs for limbs, or a trail of psychic energy, or something like that. Just, try to look for ways for the parts to be more distinct, instead of simply grey blobs.
![[Image: shrine.gif]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/344477/shrine.gif)