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Virtua's Summer thread 3.0
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Perhaps the only thing I can spot immediately is that you've got cross-hatching, which doesn't really work for an object that's clearly metal (and thus shouldn't have any such rough looking shading.)

As for why it feels like it's missing something, maybe it's the way you've shaded the left arm and leg? It doesn't look entirely right like that, even though I get the approach you're going for with it.
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Virtua's Summer thread 3.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-08-2014, 11:01 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by DoctorGrey - 07-09-2014, 03:08 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-10-2014, 03:58 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-19-2014, 01:39 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by nicktheslayer - 07-19-2014, 04:30 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-19-2014, 10:51 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-20-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Sevenstitch - 07-20-2014, 05:14 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by nicktheslayer - 07-20-2014, 05:37 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Shade - 07-20-2014, 10:17 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Gors - 07-21-2014, 06:00 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-21-2014, 03:02 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-28-2014, 10:20 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Ton - 07-29-2014, 03:24 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by StarSock64 - 07-30-2014, 02:36 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-03-2014, 09:58 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-07-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-09-2014, 10:29 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Demonlemon - 08-10-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Vipershark - 08-11-2014, 02:37 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Gwen - 08-11-2014, 02:33 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Ton - 08-11-2014, 03:35 PM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-14-2014, 08:51 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-26-2014, 10:46 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 2.0 - by Virtuaboy123 - 06-30-2015, 06:31 AM
RE: Virtua's Summer thread 3.0 - by Ridge Troopa - 06-30-2015, 01:32 PM

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