Taking a crack at game development

[E-Man]

I'm not sure why I got some more feedback on this, but I'll go ahead and start writing the overall script. It should provide a good walkthrough on what to do for this game. What do you think of it?

The Script (intro)

*We see a closeup of E-Man's laptop screen. E-Man himself is mostly seen offscreen as he applies a few strokes to a part of the image he is working on.*

E-Man: Just a few more strokes aaaannnnnnnd… Done!

*Camera shows a closeup of E-Man's head lifting up from his screen.*

E-Man: It took me about a week and several livstreams, but I finally finished this drawing for Gors! I'll see if he's around, so I could give this to him.

*E-Man taps a key on the computer and the image prints out from the nearby printer. He grabs the image and leaves the house.*

NOTE: E-Man will be outside his house and the player will begin to control him.

PK conversation

*(Optional, but will change some dialog options in the future) E-Man walks up to Gors' villa and knocks on the door. PK emerges from the house.*

PK: Yeah?

E-Man: Oh! PK! I didn't expect to see you here since this is Gors' house and all.

PK: Well, I have nothing better to do right now, so what do you want?

Tree 1 - What are you doing in Gors' house?

PK: Errr… Cleaning and stuff, really.

E-Man: Mind if I help?

PK: Thanks, but I'm more or less expected to do this myself. Besides, I don't think you want to touch any of Gors'…… Unmentionables.

E-Man: Ick…

Tree 1 - Why are you doing this anyway? I doubt you're cleaning his house out of the goodness of your heart. Heck, do you even still have a heart?

PK: Well, first of all, if you ever played Luigi's Mansion, it should be proof enough that we still have hearts even though we're dead. Secondly, as embarrassing for me to even mention, I lost a bet to Gors.

Tree 1 - What is the nature of this bet? Maybe I could guess.

PK: I'd… Rather not talk about it.

E-Man: Let me guess… Did you bet on Cat Races?

PK: No.

E-Man: See how many tentacles you could bowl over?

PK: Nope.

E-Man: Held a contest to see who could hold their breath for ten minutes?

PK: E-Man, I don't want to talk about it!

E-Man: Oh, sorry… Besides, now that i think of it, you probably would have won tat last one hands down.

PK: ………

E-Man: Sorry…

Tree 2 - Is Gors around? I have picture to give him.

PK: Ah, cool. Too bad he isn't here, though.

E-Man: Really? And I walked all this way, too. *Snaps fingers* Darn…

Tree 2 - If Gors isn't here, then where is he?

PK: What? Did you miss the big announcement Dazz made? He and Gors are at the Tower and they have something to say to all spriters on the site.

E-Man: *Sigh* Serves me right for spending all that time drawing and not paying attention… Got any idea on what it is and are you going?

PK: Beats me. Also, I'm a little tied up at the moment, so I can't come.

Tree 2 - The Tower? What?

PK: You've been an active member on the Resource for a while now, yet you still don't know what the Tower is?

E-Man: Errrr…

PK: Look, I'll make this brief. The VG Resource Transmissions Tower is the hub of this place. It's where all the sprite submissions are transmitted across the world. Just follow the path right there and it's the tall building.

E-Man: Thanks. You know, since I haven't done a whole lot of submissions, I don't always go there, but I know what you're talking about now.

*PK rolls his eyes.*

Tree 3 - How are you feeling, friend?

PK: Well, I'm a little bummed out that I'm here instead of joining everyone else at the tower, but otherwise, I'm okay.

E-Man: I see… I'm just checking since you do seem a little depressed from time to time. I tend to worry about others who are a bit down in the dumps.

PK: Yes… Ummm… Thanks?

Tree 4 - It was nice chatting with you. I'll see you later!

PK: Okay, take care, mate.

(Note: if E-Man talks to PK again, he'll get this greeting.)

E-Man: Yo, PK!

PK: What now?

*E-Man heads down the path to the VG Resource Transmission Tower. He encounters a group of people.*

The conversation

(If E-Man did not talk to PK first, this will be how it starts out.)

E-Man: What's this all about?

*Engages into a conversation with a random member from the crowd.*

E-Man: Excuse me, but what's going on here?

Member: Didn't you hear? Dazz has announced that he has some big news to share with Gors.

E-Man: To think I would have walked to his house to deliver a gift… Well, this certainly saves me a trip!

Member: Yeah, but I don't think Gors wants anything until after this is all over.

E-Man: I know that. That goes without saying, really.

(If E-Man did talk to PK, this will happen instead.)

E-Man: Ah! Goess this is the announcement PK mentioned earlier.

*Engages into a conversation with a random member from the crowd.*

E-Man: Excuse me, but is this the big announcement Dazz mentioned before?

Member: Yup! You couldn't have come here at a better time.

E-Man: I see… Well, I'll just wait through this and give Gors a picture I drew once it's done.

Member: You really have a habit of saying everything you're going to do, huh?

E-Man: Heh… Sorry…

Tree 1 - Ay ideas on what they're going to announce?

Member: Beats me! I was told that it is going to be big and will attract a lot of attention to this site.

E-Man: Ah! I really hope it's that comic section I've been dying to see for some time now.

Member: Yeah… Sure… Let's go with that.

Tree 1 - What do you think this event is about?

Member: Who cares? As long as still means that we could get back to spriting and there would be no major staff changed, I'm happy!

Tree 2 - Is the event over by any chance?

Member: Nope! You're just in time! It should start any minute now.

Tree 3 - You know, waiting around is kind of boring…

Member: I try to pass the time by playing video games in my mind.

E-Man: I tried that a few times before. I hardly ever get past the tutorial area of most of them. It's a shame that I'm supposed to be relatively smart, yet my processing power for games does not even have the length of sustaining them like an NES has.

Member: You really shouldn't brag, dude. Besides, I'm close to defeating Ganon in Ocarina of Time and you're messing up my concentration.

E-Man: *Whistles* I'm impressed!

Tree 4 - Well, it was nice talking to you.

Member: Sure thing, pal.

*E-Man hears the sound of the doors of the tower opening.*

E-Man: Ah! Looks like it's about to start now! Funny how these events tend to start just when you want them to.