08-10-2014, 11:09 PM
A few things:
~It's kinda hard to make out Zinger's legs and antennae against the black parts, you could probably make them a tad lighter without going too off-model
~Gnawty's shading is weird. Do you have a general lightsource for the enemy sprites? Kritter's seems to suggest that the light is coming from above, but with Gnawty's you can't tell and it looks as if he has multiple lightsources even
~You could fix Kritter's pose by turning his feet a bit more toward us
~I also think that maybe Kritter's lower stomach should be shaded in the middle to imply leaning over since the area around it is shaded
~It's kinda hard to make out Zinger's legs and antennae against the black parts, you could probably make them a tad lighter without going too off-model
~Gnawty's shading is weird. Do you have a general lightsource for the enemy sprites? Kritter's seems to suggest that the light is coming from above, but with Gnawty's you can't tell and it looks as if he has multiple lightsources even
~You could fix Kritter's pose by turning his feet a bit more toward us
~I also think that maybe Kritter's lower stomach should be shaded in the middle to imply leaning over since the area around it is shaded
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