01-02-2009, 04:21 PM
Bike guy tries to steal old lady's dentures..Who does that?
That was a horrible and random attempt at being funny.
And don't say "sorry. you're wrong" too because it's true. There's nothing good about this, the 2nd page with the horrible humor already proves it's bad, and it's gonna continue to be bad. And 1up is right, you can't tell people to leave and come back when the story's progressed, that already shows you failed at trying to make it interesting in the first place. Not trying to offensive here, but this comic has a horrible start.
Also, if this is gonna be a story...DON'T MAKE IT 4 PANELS.
That was a horrible and random attempt at being funny.
And don't say "sorry. you're wrong" too because it's true. There's nothing good about this, the 2nd page with the horrible humor already proves it's bad, and it's gonna continue to be bad. And 1up is right, you can't tell people to leave and come back when the story's progressed, that already shows you failed at trying to make it interesting in the first place. Not trying to offensive here, but this comic has a horrible start.
Also, if this is gonna be a story...DON'T MAKE IT 4 PANELS.