08-22-2014, 04:28 PM
*whew* where to start
well first off the proportions are pretty rancid, especially for the walking cycles in which he looks like he's slipping on a banana peel
the colors are waaaayyyy to vibrant. Contrast is a good thing, but when your character looks like a color wheel that's a different story.
Due to "pacman" being too small, it looks like the jaggies from his body form a lump on his head. That's never a good thing.
I'd say the best sprite here is the "tfr idle" stance, though his shoes look a bit bubbly tbh.
TL;DR, I'm guessing you're a beginner so there's a lot of errors, and I won't blame you. You'll get better if you keep practicing.
well first off the proportions are pretty rancid, especially for the walking cycles in which he looks like he's slipping on a banana peel
the colors are waaaayyyy to vibrant. Contrast is a good thing, but when your character looks like a color wheel that's a different story.
Due to "pacman" being too small, it looks like the jaggies from his body form a lump on his head. That's never a good thing.
I'd say the best sprite here is the "tfr idle" stance, though his shoes look a bit bubbly tbh.
TL;DR, I'm guessing you're a beginner so there's a lot of errors, and I won't blame you. You'll get better if you keep practicing.
![[Image: aFkJMtr.png]](http://i.imgur.com/aFkJMtr.png)