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Soldiers from Metal Gear Ghost Babel
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Looks pretty good, just a couple of things I should mention:
  • There seems to be a stray sprite (bullet?) to the left of the text "hitting". Should be removed.
  • The "looking around" sprites are a bit close to the "running" ones. Don't be afraid to space things out if it makes them look nicer.
  • The stars for the "KO" sprite when facing upwards is extremely close to the text, and if someone were to select that frame using a rectangle tool (which you should assume) it would overlap on the text. Again, spacing is good so that you don't have things squished together.
  • If the sprites for walking left/right are identical flipped versions of each other, you can remove one of them. It's not necessary (and it'll get accepted either way), but it does shrink the sheet's size so you can if you like.
That's all I can see, otherwise very well ripped!

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Soldiers from Metal Gear Ghost Babel - by Jandy - 10-22-2014, 09:41 PM
RE: Soldiers from Metal Gear Ghost Babel - by puggsoy - 10-22-2014, 10:47 PM

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