10-28-2014, 06:57 AM
it's an improvement, but being an energy whip, it should leave some particles behind. it's weird that it manages to remain solid all the time. I also don't like the dithering you used on his suit, unless he is using a pailette (in which case, I'd suggest to change the dithering's color to shine at some frames).
however, I think his face is kinda scrunched up and weird.