10-29-2014, 07:21 PM
That is an improvement. A few problems, though, the shading on the shoes is almost impossible to notice, much like the shirt in th eold version, and the shape of his head is a little weird. Here's something I came up with:
![[Image: nbQV5gg.png]](http://i.imgur.com/nbQV5gg.png)
The shoulder was a toughie; you might as well leave it alone. Also, by using the same brown from the hair on the shoes, you fix the contrast as well as trim down the palette.
![[Image: nbQV5gg.png]](http://i.imgur.com/nbQV5gg.png)
The shoulder was a toughie; you might as well leave it alone. Also, by using the same brown from the hair on the shoes, you fix the contrast as well as trim down the palette.