(03-08-2015, 11:57 PM)Keychain Wrote: Actually, as we already discussed, it is intentional, as all Touhous can fly. She's a spider youkai and I hope to add some spider webby stuff in the background too. I'll try a shadow or something in the future to help indicate that. But I don't think it'll be there in the final picture.
Yyyeah I get that but what I think MJ was suggesting was the character is off-balance.... I'm not sure if being a spider shrine-maiden would really help her in this case.
I'll use this picture as it's a little easier to point it out as opposed to trying to explain it. Also, if there's a better artist here, they could probably explain it better and show where the center should be (because I feel like mine's definitely not right)
Yours is red.
Due to the slant in her torso, it appears as if she's leaning backwards while her legs seem to just dangle straight downward. :/
The blue one is if it were straight downward (which...doesn't look right to me for some reason, why can't I figure out half the things I'm doing this morning)
Props though for keeping her hips the same size as her shoulders ( ' -')b